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Lovely Parrot 可爱的鹦鹉 昨天是我第一次和一个来自长沙的小学生交流。她非常喜欢鹦鹉。她接触的鹦鹉有绿色的羽毛和橘红色的爪子。我跟她说新加坡的飞禽公园也有很多热带鸟。我们有色彩缤纷的鹦鹉。她对这儿非常感兴趣,而我和她约好以后一起去看鸟。Yesterday was the first time that I conversed with a young student from Changsha. She really adores parrots. The parrot that she came into contact with had green feathers and orange claws. I told her that there are many tropical birds in the Singapore Bird Park. We have many vibrant colourful parrots. She was amazed and we agreed to go look at birds together next time.

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写的相当不错,仅做轻微修改:)

Lovely Parrot 可爱的鹦鹉

昨天是我第一次和一个来自长沙的小学生交流。她非常喜欢鹦鹉。她接触的鹦鹉有绿色的羽毛和橘红色的爪子。我跟她说新加坡的飞禽公园也有很多热带鸟。 ,其中就有色彩缤纷的鹦鹉。她对这儿非常感兴趣,而我和她约好以后一起去看鸟。Yesterday was the first time that I conversed with a young student from Changsha. She really adores parrots. The parrot that she came into contact with had green feathers and orange claws. I told her that there are many tropical birds in the Singapore Bird Park. We have many vibrant colourful parrots. She was amazed and we agreed to go look at birds together next time.
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