The last night was the night
The last night was the night. I went to a bar that I did not know to meet some friends. One of them have played piano and sung brazilian musics. There I have known a friend of one of my friends with who I talked a lot. He is a nice guy and certainly we'll be good friends. The music was quit amazing, my pianist friend is a great musician and singer. For those who have interest in brazilian music, I recommend to look for the genres MPB (brazilian popular music) and Bossa Nova, the musical content is very rich.
There I drank a few beers and didn't eat anything. Yesterday my only meal was lunch. And if I tell you that until now, at 12:45 o'clock, I ate no food? Someone certainly will be amazed.
The ambient of the bar is very cool and cozy. I think that it is perfect to take a girlfriend ou meet someone.
The last night was so good that I have arrived at home and slept at 2 o'clock (AM). But now I'm at work too lazy and sleepy. Fortunately today is friday.
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The Last night was the night
The Last night was the night. I went to a new bar that I did not know to meet some friends. One of them have played the piano and sang Brazilian songs musics. There I met have known a friend of one of my friends with whom I talked a lot. He is a nice guy and certainly we'll be good friends. The music was quite amazing, my pianist friend is a great musician and singer. For those who have interest are interested in Brazilian music, I recommend to look for the genres MPB (Popular Brazilian popular music) and Bossa Nova, the musical content is very rich.
There I drank a few beers and didn't eat anything. Yesterday my only meal was lunch. And if I tell you that until now, at 12:45 o'clock, I haven't eaten ate no food? Someone will certainly will be amazed.
The ambience in of the bar was very cool and cozy. I think that it is perfect to take a girlfriend or to meet someone.
The Last night was so good that I have arrived at home and went to sleep slept at 2 o'clock (AM). But now I'm at work and I'm so too lazy and sleepy. Fortunately today is Friday.
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The last night was the night
The last night was the night. I went to a bar that I did not know to meet some friends. One of them have(remove) played piano and sung brazilian musics(music or songs). There I have known a friend of one of my friends with who I talked a lot (too many words. Try "I met a friend of one of my friends and we talked a lot). He is a nice guy and certainly we'll be good friends. The music was quit (quite) amazing,( . ((new sentence for)) "My pianist friend...) my pianist friend is a great musician and singer. For those who have interest in brazilian music, I recommend to look for(searching) the genres MPB (brazilian popular music) and Bossa Nova, the musical content is very rich. (Again, put a period, start a new sentence.)There(remove) I drank a few beers and didn't eat anything. Yesterday my only meal was lunch. And if I tell you that until now, at 12:45 o'clock(remove), I ate no food? Someone certainly will be amazed.
The ambient(ambiance) of the bar is very cool and cozy. I think that it is perfect to take a girlfriend ou meet someone.
The last night was so good that I have arrived(got) at home and slept at 2 o'clock(remove. Even better would be "The night was so good that I did not get home until 2am.) (AM). But now I'm at work too lazy and sleepy. Fortunately today is friday.
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