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the story of Bella Bella was a very beautiful , kind and normal girl . She was has a dog she called it Rico and she was loving this dog very much so she always take care of it . one day , she went out to play with Rico ahead their house and while she was playing , she heared some one called her name . She felt afraid because there is no one live with her in this place , but she wanted to know who’s called her . After the sound had stopped , she tried to look for it again . And has been walking among the weeds and trees but she did not find any thing then she went back to the house when she arrived ,the dog had been playing until tiring so they fall asleep

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The story of Bella

Bella was a very beautiful , kind and normal girl . She was has had a dog she called it Rico and she was loving loved this dog very much so she always took take care of it .
One day , she went out to play with Rico in front of  ahead their house and while she was playing , she heared some one called her name .
She felt afraid because there was no one living with her in this place , but she wanted to know who’s  who had/who was calling called her .
After the sound had stopped, she tried to look for it again .  She walked And has been walking among the weeds and trees but she did not find any thing, so then she went back to the house. 
When she arrived, the dog had been playing until he was tired tiring so they fall asleep.

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the story of Bella

Bella was a very beautiful , kind and normal girl . She was has had a dog she called it Rico and she was loving loved this dog (it) very much so she always take took care of it .
one day , she went out to play with Rico ahead in front of their house and while she was (they were) playing , she heared some one called calling her name .
She was afraid because there is no one is living with her in this place , but she wanted to know who’s called her .
After the sound had stopped , she tried to look for it again so she has been walking walked among across the weeds and trees but she did not find any thing then (so) she went back (returned) to the house.
when she arrived ,the dog had been playing until tiring was tired from playing 
so they fall fell asleep.
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the story of Bella

Bella was a very beautiful , kind and normal girl . She was has a dog she called it Rico and she was loving this dog very much so she always take care of it .
one day , she went out to play with Rico ahead their house and while she was playing , she heared some one called her name .
She felt afraid because there is no one live with her in this place , but she wanted to know who’s called her .
After（change into Latter） the sound had stopped , she tried to look for it again . And has been walking among the weeds and trees but she did not find any thing then she went back to the house
when she arrived ,the dog had been playing until tiring
so they fall asleep

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