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self introduction Hi!my name is Keisuke. I have first time to write a note, I will introduce myself. I born in Japan.I'm a Japanese. I had been live in America from 2 to 4.But I don't remember that, therefor I can't speak English. My hobby is playing any sport.Now I have playing golf,soccer,tennis and baseball. When I was student, I specialized in economic at university. But I belong to Baseball club, I don't studied hard,Because baseball club had a practice everyday. Now I work at IT solution company in Tokyo. I'm in charge of solution sales. My company has a many product, for example a laptop , a mobile tablet , a enterprise server and software. My customer is a major transportation business enterprise. that all.

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self introduction

Hi! My name is Keisuke.
This is my first time to write a note, I will introduce myself.

I was born in Japan. I'm a Japanese.
I had been  lived in America from age 2 to 4, but I don't remember that. Therefore I can't speak English.

My hobby is playing any sport. Now I play golf, soccer, tennis, and baseball.

When I was a university student, I specialized in economics. at university.
But I belonged to a baseball club, I don't studied hard,Because baseball club had a practice everyday.

I didn't study hard because I belonged to a baseball club and had practice every day. 


Now I work at an IT solution company in Tokyo.
I'm in charge of solution sales. My company has a many products. For example, laptops , a mobile tablets, enterprise servers,   and software.
My customer is a major transportation business enterprise.

that's all.

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Self Introduction

Hi! My name is Keisuke.
This is the first time that I write a note on Italki. I will introduce myself.

I was born in Japan. I'm a Japanese.
I lived in America  when I was 2 to 4 years old but I don't remember that, therefore I can't speak English.

My hobby is playing any sports. Now I play golf, soccer, tennis and baseball.

When I was a student, I specialized in economics at university.
I belong to a baseball club but I don't participate much, because baseball club has practice everyday.

Now I work at an IT solution company in Tokyo.
I'm in charge of solution sales. My company has many products, for example, laptops,  mobile tablets , enterprise servers and software.
My customer is a major transportation business enterprise.

That's all.
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self introduction Introduce myself

Hi!my name is Keisuke.
I have It's the first time to write a note, I will introduce myself.

I was born in Japan. I'm a Japanese. (you can't born by yourself so you must to use passive voice in there)
I had been live in America from 2 to 4. But I don't remember that, therefore I can't speak English.

My hobby is playing any sports.Now I'm have playing golf, soccer, tennis and baseball.

When I was student, I specialized in economic at university.
But I belong to joined Baseball club. I don't studied didn't study hard because in baseball club, I had a to practice everyday.

Now I work at IT solution company in Tokyo.
I'm in charge of solution sales. My company has a many products, for example a laptops , a mobile tablets , a enterprise servers  and software.
My customer is a major transportation business enterprise.


that all.

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self introduction

Hi! My name is Keisuke.
This is my first time writing a note, so I will introduce myself.

I was born in Japan. I'm a Japanese.
I had been lived in America from the ages 2 to 4. But I don't remember that, therefore I can't speak English well.

My hobbies are playing any sports. Recently I have been playing golf, soccer, tennis and baseball.

When I was a student, I specialized in economics at university.
But I belong to a baseball club and I don't study hard, because I have baseball club practice everyday.

Now I work at an IT solution company in Tokyo.
I'm in charge of sales solutions. My company has a many products, for example a laptops, a mobile tablets, a enterprise servers   and software.
My customer is a major transportation business company.

Thats all.
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self introduction

Hi!my name is Keisuke.
I have This is my first time to write writing a note, I will introduce myself.

I was born in Japan.I'm a Japanese.
I had been lived in America from when i was 2 to 4.But I don't remember that, therefore I can't speak English.

My hobby is playing any sport.Now I have am playing golf,soccer,tennis and baseball.

When I was a student, I specialized in economics at my university.
But I belong to Baseball club, I don't studied didn't study hard,Because baseball club had a practice everyday.

Now I work at an IT solution company in Tokyo.
I'm in charge of solution sales. My company has a many products, for example a laptops , a mobile tablets , a enterprise servers   and softwares.
My customer is a major transportation business enterprise.

that is all.

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