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Hello,
Today I'm full of sadness because I haven't news of the woman who is in my heart. We are far each other and this is not really easy all the days for communicate. This are from thousands kilométers who we separate. I look forwards to be at month june because I will go join her there.
I know that I not write lot today but I'm bit tired because I have been quite busy while the day and now I go to rested me a little.
I thank you for your kindness for corrected me.
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Hi Adhérald. There are a variety of different ways to write this, and these are some correction ideas. If you have questions, let me know.
Few words
Hello,Today I'm full of sadness because I don't have any news from the woman who is in my heart. We are far from each other and to communicate everyday is not really easy. There are thousands of kilometers that separate us. I look forwards to be at month June because I will go visit her there. (Or, "I wish it were June as I will visit her and will be with her").
I know that I don't write a lot today but I'm a bit tired because I have been quite busy today and now I will go rest a little.
I thank you for your kindness to corrected me.
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