A bad experience
When I was 15 years old, I travelled to Punta Cana. I had never been out of Spain before and let alone at the other side of Atlantic Ocean.
When I arrived to de airport I was a bit nervous because it was my first flight. I was already in the plane and suddenly the engines started to run. I was a little overwhelmed but I achieved to relax. The holidays in Punta Cana was awesome, the weather was sunny and the temperatures warm. But the day before we had to return to Spain, an hurricane was approaching. Rains were becoming stronger and there were floods in the country. We arrived to the airport and we didn’t know if we would be able to take off. Finally, I could leave, but I was horrified. I said myself, “If you don’t relax you will die of a heart attack”. During the flight we had strong turbulences but finally landed in Spain.
Punta Cana is a lovely place, but if you want to have a quiet holidays I would recommend you don’t travel in hurricanes season.
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When I arrived a the airport I was a bit nervous because it was my first flight. I was already in the plane and suddenly the engines started to run. I was a little overwhelmed but I managed to relax. The holiday in Punta Cana was awesome, the weather was sunny and the temperatures warm. But the day before we had to return to Spain, as a hurricane was approaching. The rain was becoming stronger and there were floods in the country. We arrived at the airport and didn’t know if we would be able to take off. Finally, we could leave, but I was horrified. I said to myself, “If you don’t relax you will die of a heart attack”. During the flight we had strong turbulence but finally landed in Spain.
Punta Cana is a lovely place, but if you want to have a quiet holiday I would recommend you don’t travel in the hurricane season.
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A Bad Experience
When I was 15 years old, I travelled to Punta Cana. I had never been out of/left Spain before, and let alone at to the other side of the Atlantic Ocean.When I arrived at the airport, I was a bit nervous because it was my first flight. I was already in the plane and suddenly the engines started to run/When I got on the plane, the engines started up. I was a little overwhelmed but I achieved managed to relax. The holidays in Punta Cana was were awesome/My time in Punta Cana was awesome, the weather it was sunny and the temperatures warm. But However, the day before we had to return to Spain, a hurricane was approaching. The rain was were becoming stronger/heavier and there were floods in the country. We arrived to at the airport and we didn’t know if we would be able to take off. Finally, I could leave,we were able to leave, but I was horrified. I said to myself, “If you don’t relax, you will die of/have a heart attack”. During the flight we had strong turbulences but finally we landed in Spain/There was a lot of turbulence during the flight, but we finally landed in Spain.
Punta Cana is a lovely place, but if you want to have a quiet holiday, I would recommend you don’t travel in hurricane season.
Well done! Very well written :)
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