Nightcap now

Tomorrow is a public holiday called National Foundation Day in Japan, so I am enjoying a nightcap now. I usually drink sweet potato shochu or a shochu highball. My favorite flavor of shochu highball flavor is a plum and oolong tea. By the way,  the my garden's buds of my weeping plum got bigger. I will try to check it again tomorrow.

Nightcap now

Your writing is awesome! Just a few pointers:

1. You must state that it is a public holiday. You could also say," Tomorrow is Foundation Day in Japan."

2. National Foundation Day is a holiday, a proper noun, which requires capitalization.

3. You don't drink just one sochu highball in your entire life, you drink many of them, so you need to pluralise this noun.

4. Keep it simple.

5. You have many weeping plum buds, so you need to use 'them' instead of 'it' for a singular noun.

Keep up the great work!