Friend meeting
My friend moved to other county in the last year. We study different university. We were busy with our lessons and works, so we did't have time to meet . I miss her so terribly.
She came back to hometown on Chinese new year. I felt so surprise because I came back to hometown too. I had a great meeting with her. We visited a beer factory and eaten many delicious food at a night market. We were chatting away nineteen to the dozen. It was a really happy time for me.
She has gone home this morning. I look forward to seeing her again.
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Good job, Joy! I can understand what you have written. I have put some corrections underneath for you :)
Meeting my Friend
She came back to our hometown on Chinese New Year. I was so surprised because I came back to our hometown too. I had a great time with her. We visited a beer factory and ate many delicious foods at a night market. We were chatting away nineteen to the dozen. It was a really happy time for me.
She went home this morning. I look forward to seeing her again.
As you can see, most of the corrections are to do with tense (past, present, future). Your writing is in the past tense, so it is good to check that you have changed your verbs :)
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