2016.02.9
My friend has two dogs. One named bingo one named afei. They are very cute and clever. The day before yestoday, my friend took two dogs to a party. There were to many people. Bingo and afei only can stay in the courtyard. My friend said afei felt he is not a dog, he is a human. So afei doesn't like play with kids. He wanted to go inside with the adults. Bingo very like play with kids. He run quickly. See these two cutes. I want a dog too.
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2016.02.9
My friend has two dogs. One is named (but it's better to use "called" instead) Bingo one is named Afei. They are very cute and clever. The day before yesterday, my friend took the two dogs to a party. There were too many people. Bingo and Afei could only can stay in the courtyard. My friend said Afei felt feels he is not a dog, he is a human. (I would write this as "My friend says Alfei believes he is human, not a dog") So Afei doesn't like to play with kids. He wanted to go inside with the adults. Bingo very likes to play with kids very much. He runs quickly. See these two cutes. I want a dog too.Very good, but don't forget to use capital letter when writing people's names (or dogs even!)
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