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I went to hiking... I went to hiking with my sister although it was cold and cloudy weather. We had to be careful not to slip on the ice because someplace remain the snow and watch out for muddy pool. It had been safer if we should select the paved road...

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I went to hiking...

I went to hiking with my sister, although the weather it was cold and cloudy weather. [or "it was cold and cloudy."]
We had to be careful not to slip on the ice because someplace remain the snow remained in places and we needed to watch out for muddy pools.
It would have had been safer if we should to select the paved road... 

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