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Exercise 3, a formal letter. Dear Ms Jenkins, I'm writing in connection with your scholarship request. We regret to inform you that we can not accept you in this program, because your request form had been to late. But if you are still interested in our program you could try in next season. Just one note to say that the period of inscription will be able the next month, and you should know that our team will be really happy to have with us someone like you. Please, feel free to contact me if you have any questions.

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Exercise 3, a formal letter.

Dear Ms Jenkins,

I'm writing in connection with your scholarship request. We regret to inform you that we can not accept you in this program, because your request form was received too late. If you are still interested in our program you are welcome to apply again next season.

Just one note to say that the period of subscription will be next month, and you should know that our team would be really happy to have someone like you with us.

Please, feel free to contact me if you have any questions.


Hello Indre,

Without seeing the original question it is difficult to say how good your answer is. There are some very good formal phrases used in this text. I have just made a few corrections - one to make a phrase passive which sounds better and one is a more formal invitation.


Best wishes


Bob

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Exercise 3, a formal letter.

Dear Ms Jenkins,

I'm writing in regard to your scholarship request. We regret to inform you that we cannot accept you in this program because your request form was received too late. If you are still interested in our program you can reapply next season.

Please take note that the submission period***** will be next month and you should know that our team would be really happy to have with  someone like you with us.

Please feel free to contact me if you have any questions.


*******I am confused with "the period of inscription" so I had to guess at what you were trying to say.  

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