The importance of sport
In my opinion, sport is very important for life. First, it helps you to stay health because it supports all the body and makes you feel better with yourself. Secondly, it is a stress relief. Thirdly, it makes you more competitive. I think that if you achieve results in sport, you can easier reach goals in other fields of life.
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The importance of sports
In my opinion, sports are a very important part of life. First, it helps you stay healthy because it supports all the body and makes you feel better. Secondly, it is a stress relief. Thirdly, it makes you more competitive. I think that if you achieve results in sports, you can much more easily achieve your other goals in life.
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The importance of sport
In my opinion, sport is very important for life. First, it helps you to stay health because it supports all the body and makes you feel better IN yourself. Secondly, it is a stress relief (We would probably say "It is a good way to relieve stress"). Thirdly, it makes you more competitive. I think that if you achieve results in sport, you can REACH GOALS MORE EASILY in other fields of life.Sounds great though, well done
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Thank you for the advice!!
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Good job Filippo. Keep up the hard work. The others have posted some good corrections, but one way in which you could make the second sentence sound more authentic would be to change 'with' to 'about.' i.e. it supports all the body and makes you feel better about yourself. Ciao.
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