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Shopping day Today I have off day of work, so I decided my mom and me to go to shopping. It's Friday so the mall was super crowded. There was a big discount and for this reason I bought a lot of things. However, the best thing I bought is my nail polish. I decided to bought new colors of it that I never tried before. I loved it. It was a nice day with my mom and I grateful about it .

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Shopping Day

Today I have the day off day of work, so I decided my mom and me to go to shopping with my mom. It's Friday so the mall was super crowded. There was a big discount saleand for this reason I bought a lot of things. However, the best thing I bought is my nail polish. I decided to bought buy new colors of it that I had never tried before. I loved it. It was a nice day with my mom and I am grateful about for it .

So I decided to go shopping with my mom 

OR 

So my mom and I decided to go shopping. 

Remember when to use I or Me:

            I went shopping -> My mom and I went shopping 

           It's a picture of me -> It's a picture of me and my mom 

http://www.learnersdictionary.com/qa/when-to-use-i-and-when-to-use-me

Great work, well done. 

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Shopping day

Today I have off day of work had a day off from work, so I decided that my mom and me I to would go shopping. It's Friday so the mall was super crowded. There was a big discount and for this reason I bought a lot of things. However, the best thing I bought is was my nail polishes. I decided to bought buy new colors of it that I had never tried before. I loved it them. It was a nice day with my mom and I am grateful about for it .

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