My Winter Holiday
I am going to have a winter holiday.During the vacation i want to improve my English,so i will often write compositions on italky,and i hope to get someone‘s help.In the holiday,i will get up early in order to listen some English radio.I think the early bird catches the worm..Next i will do my homework,due to i am going to attend the college entrance examination .in the holiday,i should make full use of time.The spring festival is around the corner,i feel very happy because have an reunion with my family and recive lucky money.:)ok That’s the end for today.
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My Winter Holiday
I am going to have a winter holiday soon. During the vacation I want to improve my English, so I will often write compositions on italki,and I hope to get someone‘s help. I will also get up early in order to listen to some English radio. I think the early bird catches the worm..Next I will do my homework, because I have to take a college entrance examination**. During the holiday, I plan to make full use of my time.The spring festival is around the corner. I feel very happy because I will have a reunion with my family and receive lucky money.:) Ok that’s "it" for today.**
****When we say "That is it for today" (may not be used in Britain) it informally means that's all I have to say for today.
****" OR because I have to participate in a college entrance examination."
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My Winter Holiday
I am going to have a winter holiday. During the vacation i want to improve my English, so i will often write compositions on italki,and i hope to get someone‘s help. In the holiday i will get up early in order to listen to some English radio. I think the early bird catches the worm..Next i will do my homework since I will sit the college entrance examination in the holiday,i should make full use of time. The spring festival is around the corner. i feel very happy because have a reunion with my family and receive lucky money.:) ok That’s enough for today.For 'i' read 'I' throughout.
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My Winter Holiday
I am going to have a winter holiday.During the vacation i want to improve my English,so i will often write compositions on italky italki,and i hope to get someone‘s help.In the holiday,i will get up early in order to listen some English radio.I think the early bird catches the worm..Next i will do my homework,due to i am going to attend the college entrance examination .in the holiday,i should make full use of time.The spring festival is around the corner,i feel very happy because have an reunion (I had a reunion or a meeting, the sentence is in the past, so you have to use the verb "to have" in the past "had", and don't forget the subject "I", before the words that begining with consonants you must use "a", but before the words that begining with vowel you must use "an", ex: a bird, a reunion / an athlete, an ant) with my family and recive (I received)lucky money.:)ok That’s the end for today.The subject "I" must be in capital letter always.
The expression about the bird it's new to me, cause here in my country we don't use that. lol hahaha
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