Could you proofread this piece of my essay? Hi, guys I am writing an essay and I am up to the third paragraph. Could you proofread my errors up to this point? Thank you a lot! Computers are increasingly becoming part of the modern life. Despite being rather popular nowadays, computers, as they are known today, did not exist 60 years ago. From its invention to the day, computers have been incorporated by the society fairly quickly, but in such an unequal way. There are still quite a few people that do not own any kind of computer. Moreover, according to the International Energy Agency (IEA), 1,5 billion people do not have access to electricity. Given that, in addition to the fact that there are currently about 7 billion people in the world, more than 20 % of the world population can not to connect to the internet from home. However, the influence that the internet have exercised over the people’s life over the past 10 years is astounding. It has changed the people’s routine in such a way that only can be compared to the effect that the electricity had when it was discovered. Both the latter and the former not only have caused drastic changes to the everyday life, but also have transformed the framework of the society as a whole.