[Part 2]

We keep preparing for our second trip day. we had a breakfast and drove to Quang Ngai province where is the hometown of my brother. 

We prepared for the second day of our trip. We had breakfast and then drove to Quang Ngai Province, where my brother’s hometown is located. 

After 3 tired driving hours, we came his home. we had 2 great days here with a lot of activities like ridding horseback, rowing on a beautiful river. 

After 3 tiring hours of driving, we arrived at his home. We spent 2 great days here doing lots of exciting things, like riding horseback and rowing down a beautiful river. 

[When we want to say that a period of time was exhausting, we can also say it was “long”. Ex. “I waited for 2 long hours.” You could also describe the time period with verbs ending in “-ing”. Ex. “four exciting days” or “one exhausting month”.]

we had chance to be a ferryman. so great. it left so many memories in our mind. 

We also had the chance to be ferryman. It was so great! It left us with so many good memories. 

I won't never forget this great time. I was taken to so many beautiful places around my brother's house. 

I won’t ever forget the great time we had. I was taken to so many beautiful places around my brother’s house. 

[“Won’t never” is what we call in English a “double negative”. “Won’t” or “will not” has a negative. And “never” is the negative form of “ever”. The two negatives cancel each other out and make a positive, like in math. “I won’t never forget” means you will forget. So you can either say, “ I will never” or “I won’t ever”.]

it was a long story. anyway, I enjoyed it. After 2 days spending in Quang Ngai, we drove back to Da Nang on the last day at night.

Yes, it was a long journey, but I enjoyed it. After spending 2 days in Quang Ngai, we drove back to Da Nang on the night of the last day. 

we came back to Da Nang at the middle night and my brother had to go to the airport to catch his plane on time to Ho Chi Minh city. He's working there. 

When we arrived at Da Nang, it was in the middle of the night. From there my brother had to leave for the airport to catch his flight back to Ho Chi Minh City, where he is working. 

The end. We have had so many memories in that backpacking trip.

The end. We have so many memories from that backpacking trip.

[This sounds like an awesome adventure! Glad you had a good time. Keep up the good work on your writing. Let me know if you have any questions.]

Hi Dinh. Great experience! You write very well in English! Here are a couple of adjustments you can make for better grammar. 

[Corrections cannot be more than 5,000 characters, so I will divide the correction into 2 parts.]

My brother and I had great days in 3 cities. we had a backpacking trip by the testing tour. 

My brother and I had a great time traveling through three cities. We went on a backpacking trip.

[What do you want to say when you write, “by the testing tour”?]

He and I are planning to hold a backpacking trip for foreigners by ourself. 

He and I planned to go on a backpacking trip for foreigners by ourselves.

[If you use the verb tense “are planning” it means you are planning the trip right now in the present. By using the verb tense “planned”, we show it happened in the past. A common expression in English is “to go on a trip”. Also, the plural form of “self” is “selves”.]

The first day, We spent a day in Da Nang, we started to leave the central Da Nang to Hai Van Pass. 

The first day, which we spent in Da Nang, we traveled from Central Da Nang to Hai Van Pass.

[The clause “we spent in Da Nang” describes your “first day”. To show that this clause (or short phrase) describes this noun, we add the word “which”. When you use a clause to describe a person, you add the word “who”. You did that in the next sentence. Good job!]

There were a lot of tourists who were travelling here. so we got the chance to meet the tourists and be good friends then. 

There were a lot of tourists who were traveling there. So we got the chance to meet them and become good friends. [Good.]

Ending the first day in Da Nang, we prepared to move to Hoi An at night. we went through many streets and the end dropped at a homestay. 

Ending the first day in Da Nang, we prepared to go to Hoi An that night. We traveled through many streets and ended up stopping at a homestay. 

we had a great time at night here.we walked on long streets and saw the beautiful sightseeing of the ancient town. 

We had a great time traveling at night here. We walked on long streets and saw the beautiful sights of the ancient town. 

[“Sightseeing” is the activity of visiting different attractions. The things you enjoy seeing are the “sights”.]

Hoi an is the most beautiful ancient town in Viet Nam. [Good.] We met 3 nice girls from Australia on a bridge in the middle of the city. 

I didn't know why we can talk together so much in the first time meeting.:). then we took some pictures to get the memory and goodbye them. 

I don’t know how we could talk so much, just meeting them for the first time. We took some pictures to remember them [or “to remember the occasion”] and then said goodbye. 

After that we went to have a dinner, we were tasted a lot delicious local foods in Hoi An. 

After that, we went to have dinner. We tasted a lot of the delicious local foods of Hoi An. 

Hoi An is a city of Quang Nam province. Quang nam is my hometown also. Finally, the sun came out after well short sleep. 

Hoi An is a city of Quang Nam province. Quang Nam is also my hometown. We slept for a short time and then the sun came up. 

[In English we say, the sun “comes up” when a new day begins. But we say the sun “comes out” when bad weather goes away.]