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Movie Recommendation Yesterday is my grandma's 90-year old birthday, but I cannot go home. To make it up, I went to see a movie called "Xun Long Jue", a fascinate movie that I thought is the best and most interesting movie I have ever seen till now. It is about three Mojin xiaowei (grave robber) who have gotten out of this business in America going back to China and exploring a thousand-year tomb because they found their first love who was died for saving their lives twenty years ago may still be alive. Given tomb robbery needs a lot of skills, including but not limited to good Kongfu, knowledge of "Yin Yang Bagua ( the eight diagrams which is a combination of three whole or broken lines formerly used in divination) and traps, it's sort of mysterious and adventurous, like Tomb Raider acted by Angelina Julie. Well, anyone who is interested in this movie may leave a message about e-mail or similar, I would send it to you. Don't worry about the lanuage, there is English subtitle.

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Yesterday is was my grandma's 90-year old 90th birthday, but I cannot go home. To make it up, I went to see a movie called "Xun Long Jue", a fascinate [Do you mean fascinating or fantastic?] movie that I thought is was the best and most interesting movie I have ever seen till now. It is about three Mojin xiaowei (grave robbers) who have gotten out of this business in America going and went back to China and exploring to explore a thousand-year-old tomb because they found their first love, who was died for [?] saving their lives twenty years ago may still be alive.


['To make it up' means you are lying. 'To make up for it/To make it up to her' means you are doing something because you cannot do something else.' Did you go to the movies with anyone else (e.g., grandma)?]


[Do you mean 'died while' or 'died for'? A soldier dies for his country. A soldier died while in combat] 

[suggestion] The movie is about three Mojin xiaowei, grave robbers, who left their business in America to go back to China to explore a thousand-year-old tomb.


Given tomb robbery needs a lot of skills takes skill, including but not limited to good Kongfu Kung Fu, knowledge of "Yin Yang Bagua ( the eight diagrams which is are a combination of three whole or broken lines formerly used in divination) and traps, it's sort of mysterious and adventurous, like Tomb Raider, acted by starring Angelina Julie.


Well, anyone who is interested in this movie may leave a message about e-mail or similar, I would send it to you. Don't worry about the lanuage language, there is are English subtitles.

 

I like how you have advanced beyond simple thoughts and are incorporating idioms into your thoughts.


I am not an English teacher so I may have introduced grammatical errors. But I am a native English speaker, so my writing will be more similar to spoken English.

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