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My favorite Games I'll make a list os my favorite games and talk about him. well the picture is ilustractive ok. Call of Duty 4 modern warfare yes is on top list because is the game fantastic, your graphs is clean, have good history and the multplayer is awesome, your system of skill, killstreak, lvl'up is cool. today no have many player playing this game because many guy use cheaters and it's terrible. But I play him many time on long week! so the second game is Contar-Strike. that game I start play him in 2001, yes this is before I meet call of duty, this game is a classic of FPS games, a similar is Medal of Honor on console play one, this game you need more ability to aim, in call of duty it is easy.

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My favorite games

I'll make a list of my favorite games and talk about it. him.
Well, the picture is illustrative ok.

Call of Duty 4 Modern Warfare yes is on top of the list because is the game is fantastic (or 'it is fantastic'.). Your graph is clean, you have good history, and the multiplayer feature is awesome. Your system of skill, killstreak, lvl'up is also cool. Today there are not many people no have many player playing this game because a lot of many guys use cheats and it's terrible. But I play against him many times on long weeks!(1)

so The second game is Contar-Strike. that game I started playing this game play him in 2001, and yes, this is before I played meet Call of Duty. This game is a classic of FPS game. A similar game is Medal of Honor on for the console play one. For this game, you need more ability to aim, whereas in Call of Duty it is easy. 

 

Oi Mikael,

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