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Spending time with my boy I never knew a father for me. My mom told me that one day She met a man. He was a tall and thin She use to said. He liked drinking rum and dance all of the time. but he never gave a pennie to her. Time has ran and I became into an old man. I had many children too but I can not separate from them. I spend my vacations, my weekends and all of the free time with them. I am happy because I can see them grow. I can play with them. And, when they are sick or they have a problem with thier homework. My wife and me are next to them for helping. if they need something from us It is so nice when we can support them I'd like to know some verbal phrases to improve this note

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Spending time with my boy

I never knew a my father for me, but my mom has told me about him. that one day she met a man. He was a tall and thin she told me. used to say. He liked drinking rum and dancing all of the time, but he never gave her a penny. to her. Time has ran passed and I have become into an old man. I've had many children too, but I could never leave can not separate from them. I spend my vacations, my weekends, and all of the my free time with them.

I am happy because I can see them grow. I can play with them, and, help them when they are sick or when they have a problem with their homework. My wife and me I are next to them for to helping. if they need something from us. 

It is so nice when we can support them

I'd like to know some verbal phrases to improve this note

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Spending Time with my Children boy

 

I never knew a my father for me. My Mom told me that one day she met a man. He was a tall and thin - she recalleduse to say said. He liked to drinking rum and danced all of the time. but he never gave Nary a penny to for her. Time has ran passed too quickly and I had become into or "turned into "an old man. I had have You are not dead yet and hopefully your children too! many children too but I cannot be can not separated from them.  I spend my vacations; my weekends and all of the my free time with them.

I am happy because I can see them grow. I can play with them; and, when they are sick or they have a problem with thier their homework, my wife and I will be me are next to them for to helping. -- that is if they needed some. something from us

It is so nice when we can support be there for them.

I'd like to know some verbal phrases to improve this note.

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