WRITING EXERCISE Writing Exercise

I'm doing this exercise because next week I will do take a test to verify my english English seeing that I would like to join erasmus Erasmus project. 

This picture shows the place where I was born 23 years ago, Sicilia, a wonderful island that looks so amazing from the space. I really don't understand if those white things are snow on the mounts or clouds, but I think it’s the first ones one, also because if I am not wrong mistaken, this picture was taken in winter. Winters usually aren't cold in Sicilia, but last year was in this way cold, so it could be. Anyway the picture was taken by Samantha Cristoforetti, a great woman that made really glad all italian people for her travel in the Italian people very happy, because she went to space. 
I've decided to writing write something about Sicilia because I'm far from it in this at the moment and I really miss it! I would like to come back soon and probably I will do on I will probably do so in March; Until that moment time, I need to enjoy my life in other cities, like Trento and Milan, that but they can never be perfect substitutes of for Palermo, my hometown. 

I hope that someone could check my writing. I need to pass the exam; it's B2, I can get it, but I'm a little bit afraid for of the writing exercise! 

Thanks, 
byee Bye

You did pretty well on this writing exercise Claudio, I did notice a few mistakes, however, mostly I found a few words missing, and one of your sentences needed to be rewritten to make better sense. There were also a few minor grammar issues, if you have any questions, please ask. I’d be happy to help you practice and improve your English if you would like, just let me know!