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Introduction
Hi! This is the first time I write here. I haven't written in English in a while... I feel like I've forgotten almost everything! I'm used to reading in English, but writing and speaking... is a different matter.
I really like the idea of the notebooks. Having someone who corrects your mistakes makes me feel more secure. Even so, I'm fighting against the impulse of looking over the text, time, and time and again, searching for mistakes...
I suppose I need practice more! Practice makes perfect or I hope so. :D
Such a boring text! I'm going to try to think about an interesting topic next time.
Sorry about that, I didn't see this the first time
Introduction
Hi! This is the first time I write here. I haven't written in English in a while... I feel like I've forgotten almost everything! I'm used to reading in English, but writing and speaking... is a different matter.
I really like the idea of the notebooks. Having someone who corrects your mistakes makes me feel more secure. Even so, I'm fighting against the impulse of looking to look over the text, time and again, searching for mistakes...
I suppose I need to practice more! Practice makes perfect or so I hope so. :D
Such a boring entry text! I'm going to try to think about an interesting topic next time.
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Great job! Below are some comments as to how you can improve on this:
- While "the impulse of looking" is grammatically correct, it sounds a bit stilted to me. I think "the impulse to look" sounds better and is more common.
- Just as in Spanish you would say "necesito practicar", you need to say "I need TO practice" in order to put it in the format: need + <infinitive>.
- We wouldn't really refer to this as a "text". I think "entry" (as in journal entry) would be better.
Introduction
Hi! This is the first time I've writen here. I haven't written wrote in English for a while... I feel like I've forgotten almost everything! I'm used to reading in English, but writing and speaking... is a different matter.
I really like the idea of the notebooks. Having someone who corrects your mistakes makes me feel more secure. Even so, I'm fighting against the impulse of looking over the text, time and again, searching for mistakes...
I suppose I need to practice more! Practice makes perfect or I hope so. :D
Such a boring text! I'm going to try to think about an interesting topic next time.
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