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A day in a museum. That was a normal day in the morning when suddenly my mom begged me to accompany her and her friend to go to a museun. I must mention that by that date I already had gone to that museum two times. My experience there was so boring and I only have bittersweet memories from that place. That is why I rejected that plan without a second thouth. Another thing you should now about me is that I am not fond on goin to museums, most of the time they bore me. But then I remembered that my mom told me before about another museum, to the one she wanted to go. This museum is the house of Lev Trotsky. I thougth going there might be a good idea. The three of us went to the museum, there was a guide very eloquent that related us Trotsky's life. The journy into his life just started when I relize that going there was the best decision of the day. I will not deepen into the details, I will just mention the most relevant facts for me, and also what I felt when I was there in that place. One fact very interesting is that Lev Trotsky is not the original name of this russian revolutionary, the real name was Lev Davidovich Bronstein. Do you wonder why he changed his name? At first I thought it was because he didn't want him to be found, since he was being pursued by the russian tsar. Even though I was wrong, he change his name bacause when he was in prison, the jailer agreed with Lev's values and let him and his comrades go free. The name of that guard was Trotsky so in order to honour him, Lev Davidovich Bronstein changed his name into Lev Trotsky. While listening to his story and looking at his house I felt so overwhelmed. It was such a honour to be in the house of a man with that kind of ideals and conviction. I felt as if I had a little piece of hystory in my hands and all around me. There are more remarcable facts, but not as much time as it is needed to write about them.

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A day in a museum.

That It was a normal day in the morning when suddenly my mom begged me to accompany her and her friend to go to a museunm. I must mention that by that date I already had gone to that museum two times. My experience there was so boring and I only have bittersweet memories from that place. That is why I rejected that plan without a second thouthght. Another thing you should now about me is that I am not fond on going to museums, most of the time they bore me. But then I remembered that what my mom told me before about another the museum, to the one she wanted to go she wanted to vist. This museum is the house of Lev Trotsky. So I thougthht going there might be a good idea. The three of us went to the museum, there was a very eloquent guide very eloquent that related told us about Trotsky's life. The Even though our journey into his life just started, when I realized that going there was the best decision of the day.
I will not deepen go into the details,. I will just mention the most relevant facts for me, and also what I felt when I was there in that place.
One very interesting fact very interesting is that Lev Trotsky is not the original name of this russian revolutionary,. the His real name was Lev Davidovich Bronstein. Do you wonder why he changed his name? At first I thought it was because he didn't want him to be found, since he was being pursued by the russian tsar.
Even though I was wrong,. he changed his name bacause when he was in prison, the jailer agreed with Lev's values and let him and his comrades go free. The name of that guard was Trotsky so in order to honour him, Lev Davidovich Bronstein changed his name into Lev Trotsky.
While listening to his story and looking at his house I felt so overwhelmed. It was such a honour to be in the house of a man with that kind of ideals and conviction. I felt as if I had a little piece of hyistory in my hands and all around me.
There are more remarckable facts, but not as much time as it is needed there is too little time to write about them.


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