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I want to buy a motorcycle in Venezuela I live in Venezuela, this is one of the most dangerous countries in the world, but we are accustomed to reality, I was thinking about get a motorcycle beacuse I like it so much. Neither I will buy a expensive motorcycle, here I will put some characteristics about it: Motor is of 250cc, is not bad for a beginner, the color is black completely, the style is chopper and the brand is UM. I will pay $350 for this purchase. ¿What do you think about this buy?

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I want to buy a motorcycle in Venezuela

I live in Venezuela, this is one of the most dangerous countries in the world, but we are (accustomed to reality,) used to it. I was thinking about getting a motorcycle because I like it so much. (Neither I will buy a) I will not be buying an expensive motorcycle, here (I will put some characteristics about it) are some of its characteristics: 

(Motor is of 250cc) A 250cc motor, is not bad for a beginner, the color is (black completely) completely black, (the style is chopper) its a chopper style, and the brand is UM.

I will pay $350 for this purchase.

¿What do you think about this buy?

 

Hi Hector, this is an interesting entry.

My corrections are in red, and the blue ones are ways of writing in a more natural style.

Good luck with your learning.

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