HAPPY BEARS AND SAD BEES

If bears feel happy, bees become very sad because bears eat the bee's home! BUT... bees feel happy and bears become very sad because bees kill all the bears.

One day the bear king thought, “If bees feel happy we will kill everyone. there for must  We must kill every bee…” and the bear king killed all the bees…
A few days later the bear king wanted some honey but the king don't  didn't have any honey! After  Finally the king remembered “I killed all the bees hereafter  and now we haven’t honey". The bear king died because of sadness… BAD END!!  (BAD ENDING FOR THE BEAR).

****In your second paragraph of your story, the story happens in the past. Don't forget to use the past tense.

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HAPPY BEARS AND SAD BEES

If bears feel happy, bees become very sad because bears eat bees home beehives! BUT if bees feel happy, bears become very sad because bees kill all the bears.

One day the bear king thought, “If the bees feel happy I will kill everyone there for must kill every bees  every last one…” and the bear king killed all the bees…
A few days later, the bear king wanted some honey but king don’t have any honey  he did not have any! After Then the king remembered, “I killed all the bees hereafter that's why we don't have n’t any honey.” And the bear king died because of sadness… BAD END!!!

HAPPY BEARS AND SAD BEES

Whenever bears feel happy bees become very sad because the bear eat the bee's nest! BUT whenever bees feel happy bears become very sad because bees kill all the bear.

One day bear's king thought “if bees feel happy they will kill everyone us therefor we must kill every bees…” and the bear king kill all the bees…
A few days later the bear king want to drink/eat some honey but the king doesn’t have any honey! After that the king remember “I killed all the bees from that day we don't have any honey” and the bear king die because sadness… BAD END!!!

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What is the moral of this story Huseyin?