sun and water
I'm afraid to be alone
because my voice turns so loud
I'm always alone
because is my voice the only voice that I can tolerate
The smoke of my cigarette
just shows me the faces that i know I will never meet
So I smoke
making my fairytale a reality show
I m afraid to be alone
but I would be ok
Because now that Im alone, I can see how much power I have to change my world
just need to breathe
Im never going to be alone anymore
now I have myself
and when I smoke I will always smile and cry
and that is ok
You need water and sun in order to see something grow
and I am growing.
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Sun and Water
I'm afraid to be alone
because my voice turns so loud
I'm always alone
because is my voice is the only voice that I can tolerate
The smoke of my cigarette
just shows me the faces that I know I will never meet
So I smoke
making my fairytale a reality show
I'm afraid to be alone
but I will be ok
Because now that I'm alone, I can see how much power I have to change my world
I just need to breathe
I'm never going to be alone anymore
now I have myself
and when I smoke I will always smile and cry
and that is ok
You need water and sun in order to see something grow
and I am growing.
Great poem Jael
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not at all, but i really like to write, I write better in spanish that for sure, but thank you, you are very kind :)
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Very interesting poem.
I especially love the line "The smoke of my cigarette just shows me the faces that I know I will never meet. So I smoke, making my fairytale a reality show."
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