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I have a hobby that is reading. I read everyday.

Today, the book I read was "you are the apple of my eyes". It was really very nice.
The book talks about [The book is about a] love story between a man [boy] and a girl when they were students 
at high school. They had a nice love story nice but finally [in the end] they couldn't marry. 

This love story is sad.

Notes:

I is always capital "I".

Usually :

a) the book is about a man and a woman (older couple)

b) the book is about a boy and a girl (younger couple)

Not usual is to mix: man + girl, or, woman + boy.

Alternatives:

* Reading is my hobby.

* The love story was very sad.

Good work Taun.

Please help me fix this passage.

I have a hobby and it is reading. I read everyday.
Today, the book i read was called "You are the apple of my eyes." It was really nice.
The book talked about a love story between a man and a girl when they were students in
high school.  They had a loving story but in the end, they couldn't married. 

This love story was sad.

Hope this helps! Great Job