It's hard to preparing prepare for a working holiday.

Recently, I applied for a working holiday visa and now I'm waiting for my health diagnose  diagnosis. While I'm I was googling, I saw a news that Austrailia tax law will be changed on 1 July 1. It was will be worsen worse than before... It's not fair. I think it's killing worhollers bad for workers. I'm really disappointed with the fact. But I'd like to go my way anyway. I want to learn English until I don't feel difficult have any difficulties when I speak English. The will is important I think. I don't want to waste my time anymore. I hope that I can do it.

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It's hard to preparing working holiday.

Recently, I applied for working holiday visa and now I'm waiting for my health diagnose. While I'm googling, I saw a news that Austrailia tax law will be changed on 1 july. It was worsen than before... It's not fair. I think it's killing worhollers. I really disappointed with the fact. But I'd like to go my way. I want to learn english until I don't feel difficult when I speak english. The will is important I think. I don't want to waste my time anymore. I hope that I can do it.

It's hard to prepare for a  working holiday.

Recently, I applied for work visa that will fund my holiday and now I'm waiting for the results of the mandatory health tests. While I was googling, I saw a news that Austrailian tax law will be change on  July 1. It will be  worsen than before... It's not fair. I think it's killing workers. I really disappointed with the new law. But I'd like to go anyway. I want to learn English well enough so that I don't feel uncomfortable  when I speak English. The will is important I think. I don't want to waste my time anymore. I hope that I can do it.

My Notes: normally you see dates about tax changes in Australia written as  month number so use July 1.

If you were ill and went to a doctor, then you would have a diagnosis for your illness. But in this case, Australia mandates (insists / directs / requires ==== all about the same meaning) that you must pass certain tests of your health.

For example, my daughter is doing the same thing as you but in Europe. She needs to pass tests for HIV, various Hepatitis viral infection and TB.

OVerall, you have composed a good short text, you have reasonably good command of written English. I have helped Koreans here with their university assignments and your English is reasonable to good rating against them.

I would advise that you do some research about where you will work in Australia. Our country is huge by comparison with Korea and it is expensive to travel around. The cities on the east coast are where most of the population lives.

Away from the coast, the population and work opportunities are sparse. And the inland climate is summer is very, very hot - that is why most of Australia is semi-desert. People regularly get lost and die in inland Australia. Some of the bodies are not found for years.

Here is one Facebook group that you might find helpful for contacts and in an emergency https://www.facebook.com/groups/UCKoreanSociety/.

If you look for Koreans in my group of Italki friends, you will also find some contacts in various cities around Australia.