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Music Hi people In this letter I will speak about music that I love. In general I like all music but there is a music that I love. The music of piano. I think that the sound produced for it is very relaxed quiet for me. When I listen to this music I feel very comfortable and very exciting. I am not able to play the piano because of I don´t study the piano and I have never practiced it. However I want to learn to play the piano when I will be older. Lovely Manuel.

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Music

Hi people

In this letter, I will speak about music that I love. [A comma "," represents two different thoughts. In this letter, In general, In summary, Without a doubt, etc.]


In general, I like all music but there is a certain type of music that I love. The music of piano Piano music. I think that the sound produced for it is very relaxeding and quiet for me. When I listen to this music, I feel very comfortable and very *exciting. [exciting means that YOU are doing something that makes someone else excited--- for example, dancing. Do you mean "excited"? You feel great?]


I am not able to play the piano because of I don´t study the piano and I have never practiced it. [choose one of those "the piano" and remove it. Either one is fine. You only need to say that once. I would remove the second one in red but either one is fine.]


However, I want to learn to play the piano when I will be am older.
Lovely, Manuel.

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Music

Hi people

In this letter I will tell you about the music that I love.
In general I like all music but there is one kind of music that I really love. Piano music. It sounds quiet and relaxing to me. When I listen to this music I feel very comfortable and very exciteding.
I am not able to play the piano because of I haven´t studied the piano and I have never practiced it.
However I want to learn to play the piano when I am older.
Lovely, Manuel.
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Learning music is one of the best thing that you can do. Enjoy playing the piano.

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