Gender or domestic violence.

We sometimes hear in on the radio or TV that womens are killed by their husbands, and for several years the government has created some plans to avoid (or prevent) this violence.
However, 55 womens have been killed during this year. Isvery sad that we have to listen this kind of notices in the middle of the 21th century. It's very sad that we have to hear about these kinds of things in the 21st century.

In my opinion, the reasons of for this problem is can be found/are in the education system. Because if one man who knows that the girls must be respected, he do will not use the violence with against them.

In addition, if men have set a good example in their house, they will do the same the children will follow suit. By contrast, they maistreat as they have seen in their house because for them this situation is normal. By contrast, if they mistreat women it is likely to be because they have grown up around violence and it is a normal reaction.

Other Another reason of for this gender violence is that the womens tend did not to say nothing anything the first time that their husbands hit them because they had fear are afraid. 

To sum up, the better is to do more plains to avert this type of violence and to teach children the importance of respecting. To sum up, the best thing to do to avert this type of violence is to put plans in place to improve the education system to teach children the importance of respect.

Gender and domestic violence.

We sometimes hear on the radio and TV that women are killed by their husbands, and for several years the government has created some plans to avoid this violence.
However, 55 womens have beenkilled during this year. It is very sad that we have to listen these kind of notices in the middle of the 21st century.

In my opinion, the reasons for this problem is education. When a man knows that women must be respected, he does not use violence against them.

In addition, if men have a good example set in their house, they will do the same. By contrast, they might mistreat women as they have seen it in their house and see the situation as normal.

Another reason for this gender violence is that the women did not say anything the first time that their husbands hit them because they were afraid.


To sum up, it is better to do more to avert this type of violence and to teach children the importance of respecting women.