First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I am Tomonori Hayashi.
My hobby is reading books, appreciating animation and playing TV games.
My interesting is cooking and the stock investment.
I'm grad student and chemistry at the college.
I am in job hunt and want to study English for brushing up my skills.
Also, because I started "Facebook" in recent days, I want to have friends in another country.
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First notebook entry: Self-introduction.
I am Tomonori Hayashi. [or: "My name is Tomonori Hayashi) (My name is Tomonori Hayashi - is more natural)My hobbies are reading books, appreciating animations and playing video games.
My interests are cooking and stock investment.
I'm grad student studying chemistry.
I am job hunting at the moment and want to brush up my English skills.
Lately, I started "Facebook" and would like to make friends from other countries.
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Hello Hayashi :). I hope you don't mind the correction. Just few problems with verb tenses and plurals. Especially when verb changes tense when the noun is a plural. Very natural mistakes by Asian English learners since there's no real plural usages in most Asian languages. Keep up the great job :) If need any help in the future let me know :).
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I am Tomonori Hayashi.My hobby is reading books, appreciating animation and playing TV games.
My interesting is cooking and the stock investment.
I'm grad student and study chemistry at the college.
I am in job hunt and want to study English for brushing up my skills.
Also, because I started "Facebook" in recent days, I want to have friends in another country.
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