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My name is Xiao Fang and twenty-three years old ,and have graduated two years ,my major in business management in university ,I am working in environment protection company, perhaps you will be ask me “why are you ready to leave this company” ,I will give you a appropriate answer .I think every people have a life goal and want to live better than other people who your friends or classmates, I am no exception .Every people know neither a free lunch nor free pies ,only ability and more hard work than other people. So I chose to leave to fine a new development direction or new working environment ,because the company I am working now cann ’t give me that I want to get.
If I can be working in your company ,I will hard work and hard study new knowledge With the fastest speed into the new job
Perhaps I am not the best appropriate for this job,but I will hard study make myself for this job as soon as possible.thanks
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My name is Xiao Fang and I am twenty-three years old ,and graduated two years ago. My major is business management, I am working in environmental protection company, perhaps you will ask me (or "you are wondering why...") “why are you ready to leave this company”. I will give you an appropriate answer. I think everybody (or every person) has a life goal and wants to live better than other people who your friends or classmates, I am no exception. Every people know neither a free lunch nor free pies ,only ability and more hard work than other people. So I chose to leave to find a new development direction or new working environment ,because the company I am working now cann ’t give me that I want to get.If I can be working in your company, I will work hard and study hard to get the skillse with the fastest speed for the new job .
Perhaps I am not the most suitable candidate for this job, but I will study hard to prepare myself for this job as soon as possible. thanks
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My name is Xiao Fang and I am twenty-three years old. I graduated two years ago with my major in business management and I am working for an environment protection company. Perhaps you will ask me “why are you ready to leave this company,” I will give you an appropriate answer .I think everyone has a life goal and wants to live better than other people such as your friends or classmates, I am no exception. Everyone knows (there's no such thing as a free lunch) only the ability to workharder than other people. I chose to leave to find a new development direction or new working environment because the company I am working with now can’t give me that I want to get.If I can working for your company I will work hard and study hard to gain new knowledge very quickly.
Perhaps I am not the most appropriate for this job, but I will study hard and make myself the right fit for this job. Thank you.
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My name is Xiao Fang. I am twenty-three years old ,and have graduated two years ago. My major is in business management and currently I am working in an environment protection company. perhaps you are thinking to ask me “why are you ready to leave this company” , an appropriate answer is that I think every person has a life goal and wants to live better than other people even your friends or classmates and co-workers, I am no exception .Everyone knows neither a free lunch nor free pies ,only ability and more hard work than another person. So I chose to leave in order to find a new development direction or new working environment ,because the company I am working at now can not provide me the tool or challenges necessary to get what I want to get.If I can work for your company ,I will work hard and study hard. I will learn quickly and fit into the new job.
Perhaps I am not the best appropriate for this job, but I will do what is necessary to make myself perfect for this job
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