Red is what I removed. Blue in brackets after a red phrase is what to replace the red phrase with.

Red with no blue means to just remove it.

At the bottom I will have the paragraph with all of my suggested changes in it.

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English TV show

In order to improve my English skills I’m looking forward (for) TV shows. A friend advised me to watch Parenthood. It is a very good TV show, it is about everyday life, so it is useful.
I have finished the entire show, so I am currently looking for a new one. Maybe I will watch Gilmore Girls or Wilfred which is another type of TV show who (that) seems funny. Do you have any suggestion ?

As for Suggestions, I don't really know what kind of shows you like but these are some of my favourites:

- Psych - Is now cancelled. It was a comedy series about a guy who is very observant and notices small details. He calls in a tip for the police which leads to the arrest of a murderer. The police think that he was in on it and that is how he got his information. So to avoid being sent to jail he claims that he is Psychic. He then works for the police as a Psychic Detective for the remainder of the series. This show is also filmed mostly in the Vancouver area of British Columbia Canada. Since I am from Vancouver, that is also something I liked about it.

- White Collar : also cancelled. Is about an art thief who escapes from prison. After he is caught, he cuts a deal with the FBI that make him a CI (Confidential Informant). So now he works for the FBI to take down criminals, while still doing some illegal business on the side without the FBI's knowledge.

Burn Notice : also cancelled (wow I like a lot of cancelled shows). This one is about an American spy. He is in the middle of one of his missions when he gets a burn notice (In the show we find out that a burn notice is a fancy way of saying that he has been fired). The show is basically him trying to find out why he was burned, and he also does some odd jobs around Miami.

Not Going Out : also cancelled (I am starting to see a trend here). This is a British comedy starring British comedian Lee Mack. If you are new to English, this may not be the best show since a lot of jokes are puns or sarcastic, and Lee Mack's accent could be hard for people to understand who are new to English. Nevertheless, it is one of my favourite shows and is really funny.

I will add one more (I could keep going but I think there is enough here)

- Suits : Finally, a series that has not been cancelled. A show about a guy who is a drug dealer. He is caught running from the cops and runs into an interview for a Lawyer position while running away. He ends up getting in for an interview anyways because one of the guys did not show up. It turns out that he has perfect recall and can repeat anything he reads word for word at will. He gets hired as an associate, but he is working illegally because he has not attended a law school or taken the exam under his name.

English TV show

In order to improve my English skills I’m looking for TV shows. A friend advised me to watch Parenthood. It is a very good TV show, it is about everyday life, so it is useful.
I have finished the entire show, so I am currently looking for a new one. Maybe I will watch Gilmore Girls or Wilfred which is another of TV show that seems funny. Do you have any suggestion ?

English TV show

PS: I recommend 'Longmire' on Netflix. It is not all about humor and the characters speak slowly.

English TV show

In order to improve my English skills, I’m looking for TV shows. A friend advised me to watch Parenthood. It is a very good TV show. It is about everyday life, so it is useful.
I have finished the entire show (series), so I am currently looking for a new one. Maybe I will watch Gilmore Girls or Wilfred, which is another type of TV show that seems funny. Do you have any suggestions ?