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Brazil, Rio de Janeiro, a nice place to visit. I'm suspect to talk about Rio. I love this city. Its one of most beautiful places in the world. The people is friendly. Whe have problems? Oh yes, we have. But now, we are living one of most peacefull moments in recent history of the city. If you dont know Rio, you dont know what you are loosing. When you have a time, come to Rio. You will agree with me.

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Brazil, Rio de Janeiro, a nice place to visit.

I know that I'm biased, but I love this city. Its one of most beautiful places in the world. The people is friendly. Do we have problems? Oh yes, we have. But now, we are living in one of the most peacefull moments in the recent history of the city. If you dont know Rio, you dont know what you are loosing. When you have the time, come to Rio. You will agree with me.
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I agree with you and I love Rio de Janeiro, too.
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Brazil, Rio de Janeiro, a nice place to visit.

I'm suspect I'd like to talk about Rio. I love this city. It's one of most beautiful places in the world. The people is are friendly. Whe Do we have problems? Oh yes, we have. But now, we are living [in/during] one of the most peacefull moments in the recent history of the city. If you don't know Rio, you don't know what you are loosing missing. When you have a the time, come to Rio. You will agree with me.

Good job! You wrote very well. Keep practicing! :)

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