My Doll.

Hi guys.I wrote a story in English.I don`t know if it`s a nice story or a cheap one but i dare to share it.
Here it is:
My Doll


I lost my beautiful doll. Has anybody seen it?. I thought i could would have my doll for ever.
Where is it? Give it back to me, or i will …. Or i will …. Nothing, i can do nothing for that just but sitting aside and crying cry for it.
And who am i talking to? That`'s crazy but i`'m talking to my young self and i asked him:
What did u do with my doll ? With my precious ? With my only entertaining thing?
Like always, when i want to talk to myself i look into the mirror
When i looked into it at myself  i saw the truth 

Because i looked at saw my wrinkles
My paled pale face. and i touched it and felt it
Then i looked around .And then looked (repetition) inside of me.
Hmmmmm
Oh my doll, you are gone indeed .
you just were with (me?) like saying a hello and then good bye. You told me you would not stay with me for long and I remember when you were going u told me : everyone can make the most of having me (not well used) but there is a bitter truth about me . my nature is bitter. I always look so fabulous to others. Wether Whether you make the most of having me or not , when i`m gone you will miss me too much and cry for my loss.
Yes you cruel doll!!!
I wish I would had never meet met you.
You just left a cut in my heart that will never heal ,
What words am I left to tell you, nothing just

Goodbye my doll, my milestone
Good by MY YOUTH

Great story!!

Just be careful with punctuation. "To make the most of something" is not well used there. You use it to express that you will make something the best as possible, like the time you spend on vacations for example.