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我原来的计划
我原来的计划是去大学学习中文,在中国学校这个大学学位保证我教英语(sorry,this sentence makes no sense to me. I don't get you.)。去年在法国我有过教英语的经历(or you just say 去年我在法国教了一段时间英语),这个经历并不好,尽管我是威尔士人(英语是我的母语),关于英语语法,我知道的很少,但我签署了一份合同我不得不呆在法国教英语六个星期。我其实讨厌这段经历,但我赚很多钱了(哈哈)。我现在在大学考虑做什么,我了解到在英国(尤其威尔士)对汉语教师的需求很高,所以我决定了成为汉语老师。虽然我肯定需要更多练习。我计划每天在italki上写一些文章,我看看(I don't konw what do you mean by that. guess you want to say that you want to check your 汉语水平?then you should use the word 检验)汉语水平(水平与质量)。我未婚妻支持我,特别是以前我告诉她我想要教英语(so you mean your fiancee support you teaching English or teaching Chinese? I'm confused.)。事实上,我的论文写的是关于如何高效的教中文。最后,跟这个计划,我的汉语一天比天进步是我的责任,(I don't know what this suppose to mean either, sorry.)也许我会独立建立我自己的事业,(I believe you want to say possibly I'll become my own boss, and build up my own business.)不仅教汉语,还要教别的语言:威尔士语,意大利语等等。
hey man, first, you express yourself clear. but it's not very veritable. have you heard of Chinglish? it's a word to describe Chinese students use their Chinese customs and grammers to speak English. you are just kind like that. actually, you can add an English version of this notebook, so that I can understand you accurately, and correct this for you again. also feel free to ask me any questions.
我原来的计划
我原来的计划是去大学学习中文,在中国学校这个大学学位保证我教英语(?)。去年在法国我积累了一些教英语的经验,这个经验并不好,尽管我是威尔士人(英语是我的母语),对于英语语法,我懂得不多,但我签署了一份合同,所以我不得不呆在法国教六个星期的英语。我其实非常很不喜欢这个经验,但我赚了很多钱(哈哈)。我现在在大学考虑怎么办,我看书时读到在英国(尤其威尔士)汉语老师的需求量很高,所以我决定了成为汉语老师。虽然我肯定需要更多练习。每天在Italki我的计划每天在Itaki上写一点文章,我看看汉语水平(水平与质量)(?)。我未婚妻支持我,特别是以前我告诉她我想要教英语。事实上,为我的论文写怎么教效果地中文(?)。最后,跟着这个计划,一天天提高我的汉语一天比天进步是我的责任,大概(?)成为我自己的老板,自己创业,不仅教汉语,还有教别的语言:威尔士语,意大利语等等。
I marked these places I can't follow you very well with a (?).
加油!相信你可以实现你的计划。
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