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Tokyo SkyTree Tower Tokyo sky tree tower, a broadcasting tower which build in 2012 linked to shopping malls is one of the most popular tourist attraction site in Tokyo. The tower is located in Taito area where there is a temple called Sensouji which is the most old temple in Tokyo. If you want to take pictures of the tower, it's too close to fit in the frame under the tower because of 634 meters high. I would recommend the place that a few people come to take pictures with professional cameras is on footbridge located in Fudanotsuji intersection, Tamachi ward. Thank you for reading!

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Tokyo SkyTree Tower

Tokyo Sky t Tree t Tower, a broadcasting tower which build in 2012  linked to shopping malls, is one of the most popular tourist attraction site in Tokyo. Built in 2012, the tower is located in the Taito area where there is a temple called Sensouji, which is the most oldest temple in Tokyo.

If you want to take pictures of the tower, it's too close to fit in the frame under the tower because of it's 634 meters high.
I would recommend the place a good spot that a few people come to take pictures with some professional cameras photographers use is on footbridge located in at the Fudanotsuji intersection, in Tamachi ward.

Thank you for reading!

トモミさん、This is a good essay. Many of the changes I made are more about style than correctness. For example, I moved "built in 2012" because it sounded better, not because it was wrong where you had it.

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Tokyo Sky Tree Tower

Tokyo Sky Tree Tower, a broadcasting tower which build was built in 2012, linked to shopping malls is one of the most popular tourist attraction sites in Tokyo. It is linked to many shopping malls.
The tower is located in the Taito area where there is a temple called Sensouji which is the most oldest temple in Tokyo.

If you're underneath the tower and you want to take pictures of the tower it, it's would be too close to fit in the frame under the tower because of it is 634 meters high.
I would recommend the a place that a few people with professional cameras come to take pictures: with professional cameras is on the footbridge located in on the Fudanotsuji intersection in Tamachi ward.

Thank you for reading!

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