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A hard day's work
We have the group meeting tonight. As usual it had a nervous atmosphere. Initially we reported the group meeting paper to our teacher and talked it carefully. After we reported our work in this weekend to him. He has a bad temper and angry to us every group meeting although we have already got used to him. It lasted four hours. We all worked a whole day and so tired that couldn't focus the brain. We want to change it but it looks like difficult.
Thursday
( it has done this to me before, ( removed formatting ))
can we learn more and ask questions about the notebook entry, without making corrections? I guess that is not the main purpose of this site.. I will try, but it can be difficult when you consider the person a friend. ..
We had a group meeting tonight. As usual, you could feel the tension as soon as you entered the room.
Before we met for the group meeting, we had all met individually with our teacher and reviewed our paper thoroughly.
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Before we met for the group meeting, we all had presented our paper individually to our teacher, after which we discussed the paper thoroughly.
-- I am going to stop here shuoshuo, if it is what you are looking for I would continue for you.. i just do not want to offend you..
JT
( the journal entry about you waking up to
see the first snow is such contrast. nice writing )
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