Who am i?

I'm brazilian, i have 19 years old, i study computer science, end i want to learn english to improve my professional career. I like to go to the beach with my friends, i like to play guitar, i like rock n' roll end my favorite band is Aerosmith. I love Aersomtih! rs.
This photo shows with my boyfriend a little place where i live .

I am Brazilian and am 19 years old. I student computer science and want to learn English to improve my professional career. I like to go to the beach with my friends. I also play guitar and like rock n' roll. My favorite band is Aerosmith. I love them! 

This photo shows my boyfriend and a little place where I live. 

Who am I?

I'm Brazilian, I am have 19 years old, and I am studying computer science. end I want to learn English to improve my professional career possibilities. I like to go to the beach with my friends, I also like to play guitar. I like rock n' roll and my favorite band is Aerosmith. I love Aersomtih! rs.
This photo shows me with my boyfriend at a little place near to where I live .

Who am I?

I'm Brazilian and I'm 19 years old. I study computer science and I want to learn english to improve my professional career. I like going to the beach with my friends, playing the guitar and Rock and Roll music. My favourite band is Aerosmith.

This photo of my boyfriend and I shows the little place in which I live.

Who am Ii?

I'm brazilian, I (1) have 19 years old*,  study computer science, end I want to learn English(2) to improve my professional career. I like to go to the beach with my friends, I like to play** guitar, i like rock n' roll end my favorite band is Aerosmith. I love Aersomtih! rs.
This photo shows with my boyfriend and me (3) and (4) a little place where i live .

* Jessica, pode dizer: I am 19 years old, ou I have 19 years, mas nunca: I have 19 years old!

** É possível dizer: I like to go... to listen to ... and I like going ... I like listening to ... Nunca ambos na mesma frase.

(1)  O pronome I escreva sempre com a letra maiúscula.

(2)  A letra maisúscula usa se também, no caso dos nomes de países.

(3) Ordem das palavras.

(4) Ligação.

Bom estudo!

Who am I?

I'm brazilian, I have 19 years old, I am a study of science computer, and I want to learn english to improve my professional career. I like to go to the beach with my friends, I like to play guitar, I like rock n' roll and my favorite band is Aerosmith. I love Aersomtih! rs.
This photo shows me with my boyfriend at a little place where I live .