My work in english

For wWednesday iI must do a little work: writting 600-800 words about on the subject "animals have good effects on benefit people who are in a hospitals". This is my beginning:

Animals make benefits those around them. Humans take own/adopt animals to have some fun and to share love with them. And we know animals give a lot of love to their masters. Dogs (or The dog) became was the first companion animal of man (or humans). of compagny. But who could have imagined that they would become remedies treatments in hospitals? More and more, it is they are used in hospitals to escort people who ask some desire compagny (paralyzed person) or to need some help (blind person). It is exactly here for this reason that we can say animals is good on benefit the life lives of humans.
Some people say talk about being scared in front of a big dog, sometimes even in front of a little dog. It is only the fact because that they don’t know how the animal will react. But animals don’t make do bad things if you love them. 

Bravo Axelle! Tu écrit l'anglais bien, et je suis d'accord avec ton sujet!