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A new qualified Spanish nurse looking for a job in a foreign country... Living away from home... Nowadays, nursing is not an easy job. I had been studying for 4 years at the University and I have to leave my country, family and friends if I want to dedicate my life to nursing. The Spanish's economic situation is very difficult which affects to its health system. However, others countries give me the opportunity to continue learning, improve my skills and become the kind of nurse that I want to be. Maybe you are wondering why I chose this field. You should know that the human life is important for me. I desire to be in the worst moments of their lives, making a difference, making feel people better. And that's wonderful and beautiful. But it is not enough having a personal commitment or profesionalism, I must speak English as a native because my career path will be in the UK. I have an interview next 19th so I need someone who is interested in teaching me English to prepare it. Finally, I would like to say that it could be difficult to be away from home, however it is more frustrating when you can't be yourself and give your best as you would like to. Just because your language! So let's help us! Regards.

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A new qualified Spanish nurse looking for a job in a foreign country...

Living away from home...
Nowadays, nursing is not an easy job. I studied for 4 years at a university and now I have to leave my country, family and friends if I want to dedicate my life to nursing.  Spain is experiencing a very difficult economic situation which is having an impact on its healthcare system.
However, other countries can give me the opportunities to continue learning and improving my skills in order to become the kind of nurse that I want to be.
Maybe you are wondering why I chose this field. You should know that the human life is important for me. I desire to be available in the worst moments of people's lives, making a difference and helping them feel people better.  For me, that's wonderful and beautiful. But it is not enough just having a personal commitment or professionalism.  I must speak English like a native speaker because my career path will be in the UK. I have an interview on the 19th so I need someone who is interested in teaching me English to prepare for it.
Finally, I would like to say that it could be difficult to be away from home.  It is even more difficult when you can't be yourself and give your best in ways that you would like to just because of your challenges in speaking thelanguage! So let's help each other!
Regards.

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A new qualified Spanish nurse looking for a job in a foreign country...

Living away from home...


Nowadays, nursing is not an easy job. I have studied for 4 years at University and now I have to leave my country, family and friends if I want to dedicate my life to nursing. Spain's economic situation is very difficult which affects to its health system.

However, others countries will give me the opportunity to continue learning, improve my skills and become the kind of nurse that I want to be.

Maybe you are wondering why I chose this field. You should know that human life is important for me. I desire to be there in the worst moments of their lives, making a difference, making feel people better. And that's wonderful and beautiful.

 

But it is not enough having a personal commitment or professionalism, I must speak English like a native because my career path will be in the UK. I have an interview on the 19th so I need someone who is interested in teaching me English to prepare for it.
Finally, I would like to say that it could be difficult to be away from home, however it is more frustrating when you can't be yourself and give your best as you would like to. Just because of your language! So let's help us!
Regards.

 

Hello Saray,

I hope your dream will come true of working in the UK. Your written English is quite good, In the first line I changed the Past Perfect to the Present Perfect but apart from that there are ver few errors.

 

Hope this helps

 

Bob

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A new qualified Spanish nurse looking for a job in a foreign country...

Living away from home...
Nowadays, nursing is not an easy job. I had been studying for 4 years at the University and I have to leave my country, family and friends if I want to dedicate my life to nursing. The Spanish's economic situation is very difficult which affects to its health system.
However, others countries give me the opportunity to continue learning, improve my skills and become the kind of nurse that I want to be.
Maybe you are wondering why I chose this field. You should know that the human life is important for me. I desire to be in the worst moments of their lives, making a difference, making people feel better. And that's wonderful and beautiful. But it is not enough having a personal commitment or profesionalism, I must speak English as a native because my career path will be in the UK. I have an interview next 19th so I need someone who is interested in teaching me English to prepare it.
Finally, I would like to say that it could be difficult to be away from home, however it is more frustrating when you can't be yourself and give your best as you would like to. Just because your language! So let's help us!
Regards.

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