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An Informal letter to a friend in Hiroshima, suggestions welcome! Its not supposed to be a formal message hence the "Jaken", "Buchi" and "nan-yo!" but if anyone could find big grammer mistakes or make small Hiroshima-ben suggestions I would be most grateful. Im very much a beginner... Thank you so much! ^^ ども (なまえ), 久しぶりだね。さいきん元気? 葉書をありがとうね、読んだら嬉しくなった。 もちろん君とみんなを覚えている、おねがいお父さんと(なまえ) と ”やほ!”を言いてください^^ 新しいの大学勉強でがんばってなんよ!今私も大学で習いる。ぶち難しいじゃけん!とにかく今までに英語勉強はどうですか、言語の質問があったら言いてください。 よく宮島と広島のお好み焼きを覚える、楽し時だったね。 Hi (name), its been along time hasnt it. Have you been well recently? Thanks for the post-card, it made me happy after reading it. Of course I remember you and everyone, please say "Hi!" to your father and (name). Good luck with your new university study! Now im also studying at university. It's so difficult! Anyway, up-to-now how is the English study going? If you have any language questions then please ask. I often think about Miyajima and Okinawa okonomiyaki, it was a fun time wasnt it. (Thanks for reading)

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どーも (なまえ), 久しぶりだね。さいきん元気してた? 

葉書をありがとうね、。読んだら嬉しくなった。
もちろん君とみんなを覚えているよ。おねがいお父さんと(なまえ) と ”やほ!”を言いてください^^ によろしく伝えといて。
新しいの大学での勉強でがんばってなんよ!今私も今、大学で習いる勉強しているよ。ぶち難しいじゃけんややこしいんじゃ!とにかくところで今までにの英語勉強はどう?ですか、言語の質問があったら言いてください言ってね。
よく宮島と広島のお好み焼きを覚えるのことをふと考えるよ。あのときは楽し時だったね楽しかったね。

I don't know alot about HIROSHIMA dialect. But I've found a excited website. It translate your words into HIROSHIMA dialect. If you can write and read Japanese, you shold try it. Below is the URL.

http://www.yokotyou.com/kotoba/hirosima.html

Anyway, I feel it's better not to correct your sentence than to correct your sentence. If I were your friends, I am glad to read your incorrect Japanese letter. Because it tell me you've tried to write Japanese with your utmost effort.

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