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My family. Help me correct it, please. In my family, there are three members, my father, my mother and me. My father is a worker and my mother is now retired at home. My father is very busy with his work. So that most of the housework is done by my industrious mom. Of cause, I will help her when I was at home. Traveling on holiday is our common interest. The fresh air and natural beauty can help us get rid of tiredness and that also can strengthen our relation. During my preparing for coming here, my parents' love and support had always been my power. And I hope in future I will be able to repay them.

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My family. Help me correct it, please.

In my family, there are My family has three members: my father, my mother and me. My father is a (you should put what kind of work he does.  Like, he is a teacher or engineer or something like that.) worker and my mother is now retired at home. My father is very busy with his work, so most of the housework is done by my industrious mom. Of cause course, I will help her when I was am at home. Traveling on holiday is our common interest. The fresh air and natural beauty can helps us get rid of our weariness tiredness and that also can strengthens our relationship. During my preparing for coming here, my parents' love and support had always been my power. My parents love and support has been my strength while preparing to come here, and I hope in future I will be able to repay them.


*The fresh air and natural beauty helps us get rid of our weariness.....*  (You can also use tiredness, but I think it sounds better with weariness.)

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