Childhood
Everybody has their own childhood; So do I. It was the time when we were a little child. It has all the interesting things which aldults can not have. Viewed from different angels, someone said that It was wonderful but others were not. But frankly speaking, it's all worth remembering ever after. Bacause I think childhood is the happiest tiime of our lives. First, Being a child, we had so much time to sleep, to play with friends. Adults will never have this wonderful thing because of their busy work. Second, do you agree with me that childhood was the best nice childlike time? We don't think so much about this complicated life such as what people's thought about ourself? or How can we make dough? or How would our life in the future, etc... Being an adult, we must ponder on many things and and maybe we can get stress. Third, Being a child, we can easily cry but also smile soon. On the contrary, adults can not. When they're sad, they're hardly smile as childs can. Moreover, Being a child, we will have many cares and protection from parents, who always love us more than themselves. And that makes we feel secure. Inconclusion, Childhood is the happiest time of our lives. For me, it was an awesome thing full of memories that are deeply engraved in my heart.
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Childhood
Or if you were referring to yourself: ...It was the time when I was a little child.
It has all the interesting things which aldults adults can not cannot have.
Viewed from different angels angles, someone some have said that It was wonderful, while but others were not so much.
But frankly speaking, it's all worth remembering ever after. Bacause because I think childhood is the happiest tiime time of our lives.
Firstly, Being being a child, we had so much time to sleep, to play with friends.
Adults will never have this wonderful thing freedom because of their busy work life.
Secondly, do you agree with me that childhood was the best nice childlike time because it was so simple?
I interpreted what you were trying to say here, not sure if accurate.
We don't think so much about this complicated life, such as what people's thought about ourself us?
or How Or how can we make dough money? or How Or how what would our life be like in the future, etc...
I think "dough" is slang, not appropriate for this context.
Being an adult, we must ponder on many things and and maybe we can get will be very stressed.
Thirdly, Being being a child, we can easily cry but also and then smile soon again. On the contrary, adults can not cannot.
When they're sad, they're hardly smile as childs children can.
Moreover, Being being a child, we will have many cares and protection and care from our parents who always loves us above all. more than themselves.
And that makes we us feel secure. In conclusion, childhood is the happiest time of our lives.
For me, it was an awesome thing time full of memories that are deeply engraved in my heart.
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Nice writing piece Phuong! Insightful, well argued and very interesting to read. Glad you had a great childhood full of wonderful memories :)
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Thank you so much :) I'll remember that.
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Phương Trà, your English is very good and some sentences are entirely correct.
But sometimes you need to think about Subject-Verb Agreement. A singular subject takes a singular verb, whereas a plural subject takes a plural verb.
It was the time when we were little children :)
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