An invitation letter(Letter No.8)

Dear Mark,

I hope you're well and that you had a fantastic vacation with your family in Singapore.

Next Monday is my boy's ("son's" is more standard) third birthday, and on that day my family is throwing a party at my home to celebrate it for him. I feel quite ashamed that I didn't do anything on his first two birthdays due to being under lots of stress at work, so we've decided to invite all of my family friends and relatives to come.

I'm very glad to invite you and your wife to join us. I've already sent and will be sending invitations to all other colleagues in our office. The party starts at 10.am; please be sure to come!

While you were away, our office has been re-decorated and we added some new amenities so that we can enjoy some hot beverages during our afternoon breaks. Also, we've employed a new office assistant, who is a capable young woman, and so we won't bother to type contracts in person. so that we do not have to personally type contracts.

Speak to you soon,

Jim

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Happy birthday to your son! I only noticed a few tiny issues. Hope this helps!