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Nowadays, people around the world are living a similar lifestyle as the spread of products has been eliminating the distinction between countries. Just take a glimpse at the malls and supermarkets in the vicinity of your home, there should be products from all the major industrial countries. This similarity worries some people. However, this very phenomenon foretells the bright future of our planet.

In history, the homogenization of products in a certain country was a very natural process and it had provided the base for further development. It's safe to say that the similarity of products from different regions as well as that of languages and cultures has always been the connective force within a country. Thus, it can be sure that spread of products will definitely promote international communication both economically and culturally. Since the trend of globalization is unstoppable, we'd better embrace it positively .

Some worry that this trend is detrimental to their traditions. Superficially, products like Coca-cola are the embodiment of cultural invasion. However, we should see the bigger picture that goods from whole world are being transported to other countries, for instance, clothes from China, machines from Germany, foods from Italy. So this is a mutual process through which countries can enrich their own culture by adopting new ideas carried by those products.

Hello Liuyong,

Interesting essay about globalisation, just a few small mistakes. the biggest problem is that you must put your spaces after the punctuation marks. Not doing this makes it very difficult for native speakers to read. Remember that the punctuation mark is usually a signal to take a pause. So when we see the mark, then we pause.

The other problem is that proper names like Luiuyong, Bob, China and Coca-cola should all begin with a capital (big) letter.

Hope this helps

Bob