I got my passport.

I got my passport.

I went to the ward office to getting my passport.
I took passport photos and applied for a passport last Thursday.
I could got it from this on Tuesday.
The ward office is near the market.
I went to the ward office first, before going to the market.
It was the first time I got a passport.
I'll go to Japan next month for a trip with my friend and I hope to travel abroad a lot.

So, I decided to study English harder.

     = add this

    = remove from sentence

    = capitalize

(Wow! That's so cool! Have a lot of fun there and good luck! ^^)

Tips: days of the week always have the first letter in them capitalized! (Monday, Tuesday, etc). Also, never begin a new sentence with "and" just combine that sentence with the previous one! :) 

I got my passport.

I got my passport.

I went to the ward office to get for getting my passport.
I took passport photos and applied for a passport last Thursday.
I was able to collect could get it from this Tuesday.
The ward office is near to the market.
I went to the ward office first, before going to the market.
It was the first time I have applied for  to get a passport.
I'll go to Japan next month for a trip with my friend, and I hope to travel abroad a lot.
So, I decided to study English harder.