Giving an advice

Hi Lisa!
It’s good that you want to get in shape, keep motivate!

As you don’t like going to the gym, you should do some exercise in your house. I don’t like the gym neither and at first I didn’t know what to do for exercise, then I found some amazing videos at the internet with good workouts that you might do at home. If you don’t like doing exercise inside your house you’ll be able to do it outside, for example in your garden!
These routines are not as boring as go to the gym, because normally you utilize all your body and not only one group of muscles, also if you’re a very busy persons it’s easier to find some time because you don’t have to leave your home.

You should try it! I think you’re going to love it!

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Giving advice

Hi Lisa!

It's good that you want to get in shape, stay motivated!

As you don’t like going to the gym, you could* do some exercise in your house. I don’t like the gym either and at first I didn’t know what to do for exercise. I found some amazing videos on the internet with good workouts that you can do at home. If you don’t like exercising inside your house you’ll be able to do it outside, in your garden for example!

These routines are not as boring as going to the gym, because normally you utilize your entire body, not just one group of muscles. Also, if you’re a very busy person, it’s easier to find some time because you don’t have to leave your home.

You should try it! I think you’re going to love it!

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Thanks for read, I'll appreciate any corrections! :)

*"Should" is ok, but it gives more of a sense of firmly telling someone what to do, "could" is more of a gentle suggestion.

Great job! Keep up the good work!

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