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It's adorable how excited people got by the idea of someone giving a damn about whether their lives are as good as they seem.
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Does this sentence make any sense?
It's adorable how excited people got by the idea of someone giving a damn about whether their lives are as good as they seem.
Its amusing to see how exicited people can become when they have an idea that someone (actually) give a damn about whether their lives are as good as they seem to be or not.
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Does this sentence make any sense?
It's adorable how excited people got by the idea of someone giving a damn about whether their lives are as good as they seem.
We can gather the context from what you might be trying to say. But... - The CONNECTION of the opinion that "It's adorable" to the CONTEXT or IDEA of "how excited people..." ---- You should use a verb to make a better connection with the two in order to explain/articulate what you're trying to say. Example: It's adorable to SEE how excited people... It's adorable to HEAR how excited people... They way I would write this out assuming you meant this in a past tense since you used the verb "got" would be... It's adorable to see how excited people got from the idea of someone giving a damn about whether their lives are as good as they seem.
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We can gather the context from what you might be trying to say. But...
- The CONNECTION of the opinion that "It's adorable" to the CONTEXT or IDEA of "how excited people..."
---- You should use a verb to make a better connection with the two in order to explain/articulate what you're trying to say.
Example:
It's adorable to SEE how excited people...
It's adorable to HEAR how excited people...
They way I would write this out assuming you meant this in a past tense since you used the verb "got" would be...
It's adorable to see how excited people got from the idea of someone giving a damn about whether their lives are as good as they seem.
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It makes a bit of sense. The last part is not so clear: whether their lives are as good as they seem. But your sentence should be:
It's adorable how excited people get by the idea that someone gives a damn about ...
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