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I want to improve my English I have been learning English for a long time. But it does not work. My English is still very poor. Sometime, I doubt wether I have the talent for it. I thought I should stop learning and it was a waste of time. However, I like English and wish I can communicate fluently with English. I am looking forward to finding a English native speaker to help me practice it.

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I want to improve my English.

I have been learning studying English for a long time, But it does not work isn't working. My English is still very poor. Sometime Sometimes, I doubt wether whether or not I have the talent for it. I thought I should stop learning and that it was a waste of time. However, I like English and wish I can could communicate fluently with English. I am looking forward to finding a native English native speaker to help me practice it.

 

 

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I want to improve my English

I have been learning English for a long time. But it does not work. My English is still very poor. Sometimes, I doubt whether I have the talent for it. I thought I should stop learning and it was a waste of time. However, I like English and wish I can could communicate fluently with in English. I am looking forward to finding a English native speaker to help me practice it.

 

Do not give up, Ella!  Your English is very impressive for someone who thinks their "English is still very poor."

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I want to improve my English

Today I saw a film called 'The Curious Case of Benjamin Button. This film is about the (whole) life of Benjamin; when he was born, he looks like an old man. As he grows up, he becomes younger and younger. He grows in backwards. At last, he dies quietly in the arms of his most dearly loved girl arm. After watching this, I was thinking/I thought how wonderful it would be is if my life can be reversed. A lot of regrettableful things will would not happen. I will cherish the people I love. I will listen to my parents' advice, and make the right decisions. I will not complain a lot, and face the difficulty in a better frame of mind/with a positive attitude. However, there is no 'if' in this world: I have to face (the) reality.

Do you like watching films?  What kind of films do you like?  Could you recommend me some good films?

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I want to improve my English

This is an short article I wrote. I find it difficulty* to express myself/[what I want to say] in English (accurately). Could you help me correct it ?  Thanks very much.

On the way to go shopping, my friends talked/were talking about how to pick/choose (the) meat which was better, and how to cook dinner *which tasted more delicious, and so on. Suddenly I realized that I cook dinner every day, but I never seem to never notice these details. In my opinion, cooking was so easy that I hardly took it seriously. Yes, I know I was totally wrong . An author once said that to in the brickwork, you can not only be a labourer/[bricklayer], you can also be a creative craftsman.

I like what the author said very much. To If/when we do one something, we should make every efforts to do it to the best of our ability, or it's a waste of time.

Since then, when I can't concentrate on what I was *am doing, such as cooking, washing, or other things, I always remember these words that remind/warn me myself not to waste the/my time.

*or  I find difficulty in expressing myself in English

* how to cook a more delicious/tasty dinner/meal

*or, in the past tense  when I could not concentrate on what I was doing

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I want to improve my English

With the development of technology, almost everyone has a cell phone. It doesnt cannot be deniedy that the cell phone make it easier for people to communicate, and its versatility/multifunctionality makes (people's) life more colorful. However, it brings about/causes/has some bad effects on people. Many people are addicted to the cell phone. They can not live without a cellphone, or feel uncomfortable in the absencet of a cellphone. They usually spend considerable time on the phone, for as it provides them with games and a lot of applications.

It is [not a]/no surprise to notice that, no matter that friends or family get together, they always focus on their cellphone and ignore others, which has affected/[destroyed] their relationships/communications (with their friends or family). Though they can chat with their friends on the phone, (the) cold words apparently can not replace the eye contact and facial expression. Friends and family face-to- face conversation has been an important part of friendship and family life, which helps us/can make us know each other better and enhance/increase our feelings. Therefore just put down your cellphone, enjoy the time with your friends and family fully, and you will find life will be wonderful.

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