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writing an cv for a US company I am not sure about a few things I wrote : "Currently studying finance in France, I am highly motivated for finding an internship in wealth management. I already have a successful first experience in this field." "I organized the mail merging of a mandatory document the advisor had to write and personalize for each client. The document now actualizes itself with an Excel database and automatically includes the required descriptions and annexes." "Management Bachelor’s degree" (or should it be Bachelor's degree in management ?) "A firm supplying and installing exterior joineries for companies and individuals." "I like reading French and English fiction stories ." Thank you for your help !

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writing an a cv for a US company

I am not sure about a few things I wrote :

"Currently studying finance in France, I am highly motivated to find for finding an internship in wealth management. I already have a successful first experience in this field."

"I organized the mail merging of a mandatory document the advisor had to write and personalize for each client. The document now actualizes itself with an Excel database and automatically includes the required descriptions and annexes." <I can't help you with this sentence because I'm not sure I understand what you're trying to say. It may be fine, but it sounds like something of a technical nature I'm not familiar with. 

"Management Bachelor’s degree" (or should it be Bachelor's degree in management ?)  Go with Bachelor's degree in management. You could also say BA in management. (BA stands for bachelor of arts. One might also have a bachelor of science degree, or BS, usually if one studied some kind of science.)

"A firm supplying and installing exterior joineries joinery for companies and individuals."

"I like reading French and English fiction stories ."


Thank you for your help !

 

Remember no spaces in front of punctuation at the ends of sentences. 

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